- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:46, 21 June 2015 (UTC)
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Let It Go (EP)
edit... that Heo Young-saeng chose dance song "Let It Go" as his title track because many had expected him to choose a ballad song instead for his solo debut album?
5x expanded by 001Jrm (talk). Self-nominated at 01:59, 13 May 2015 (UTC).
Hook fact checks out, according to Google Translate. AGF on paraphrasing (a lot of the sources are Korean, a language I can't read). No image to check. Length and age are appropriate. Good to go. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:57, 15 May 2015 (UTC)
The hook doesn't make sense. What was his motivation? Also, the article needs a light copyedit for encyclopedic grammar. Yoninah (talk) 17:14, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
- I thought that it would be hooky-er if I write it that way.. Anyways, uhmm inserting phrases like "...to challenge himself as a solo artist..." and "...to expand his singing abilities..." would be to obvious and not hooky, I believe? sooo.. how 'bout,
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... that Heo Young-saeng chose dance song "Let It Go" as his title track for his solo debut EP to get away from his usual ballad songs that people already know about? - ALT2:
... that Heo Young-saeng chose dance song "Let It Go" as his title track for his solo debut EP to try out other genres different from his usual ballad songs?
- I also did a few edits on the article, but let me know if it needs more copyediting. Thanks! 001Jrm (talk) 22:17, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
- I went ahead and copyedited the page for English grammar and to make the language more encyclopedic. It's not clear to me why you're calling it an "EP" when it's a mini album. What's left of the ballad/dance tempo idea could yield this hook:
- ALT3: ... that Heo Young-saeng, who usually sings ballads as a member of South Korean boy band SS501, chose a dance song for the title track of his solo debut album, Let It Go? Yoninah (talk) 13:16, 18 June 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you... so much! Yes, this source refers Let It Go as a mini-album. However, EPs are often referred to as mini-albums in S.Korea (probably in Asia). Wikipedia redirects 'mini-album' to Mini-LP, but recognizes that releases often referred to as Mini-albums in Asia should see Extended play. So, should I use mini-album or EP? Thanks! 001Jrm (talk) 20:13, 18 June 2015 (UTC)
