Template:Did you know nominations/Laureus World Sports Awards
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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 03:55, 28 November 2017 (UTC)
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Laureus World Sports Awards edit
... that in 2017, the Refugee Olympic Team at the 2016 Summer Olympics won the Sporting Inspiration Award at the Laureus World Sports Awards?
- Reviewed: Josephine Cafrine
Improved to Good Article status by The Rambling Man (talk). Self-nominated at 12:54, 17 November 2017 (UTC).
- reviewing --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:16, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
Substantial article, good lay-out, plenty of good sources, no copyvio obvious. Sorry, I think the hook is too wordy, and brings the main topic too late. You don't have to imitate the brevity of the headline in the source, but a bit more catchy would please me ;) - I believe the years add nothing to attract, nor the repetition of Olympic. Focus on "Refugee", "Team" and "Inspiration"! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:24, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1: "... that in 2017, a team of refugees won the Sporting Inspiration Award at the Laureus World Sports Awards?" The Rambling Man (talk) 22:36, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
Inspiring! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:45, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1: "... that in 2017, a team of refugees won the Sporting Inspiration Award at the Laureus World Sports Awards?" The Rambling Man (talk) 22:36, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
