Template:Did you know nominations/Laura Seddon Greeting Card Collection

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The result was: promoted by Mat ty.007 09:48, 22 December 2013 (UTC)

Laura Seddon Greeting Card Collection edit

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... that the Laura Seddon Greeting Card Collection includes Britain's first commercially produced Christmas card?

Reviewed: Synergistic catalysis

Created by Yarikata (talk). Self nominated at 14:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC).

The article meets the guidelines (new, long enough, properly cited) and the hook is interesting and referenced. Bemanna (talk) 11:49, 17 November 2013 (UTC)

Some of the phrasing in this article appears quite close to that of its sources: compare for example "scrap-albums and commonplace books compiled by Victorian and Edwardian ladies in their leisure time" with "albums and commonplace books mainly compiled by Victorian and Edwardian ladies in their leisure time". Also, some of the content, for example "Her gift of the cards to the University resulted in the establishment of the Ephemera Studies section there", does not appear to be supported by the cited source. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:12, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

I have recut this article, added a pic and several new refs and rephrased etc - hopefully an xmas nom. Victuallers (talk) 14:39, 23 November 2013 (UTC)

Looks good to go now. Nikkimaria (talk) 17:10, 3 December 2013 (UTC)