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The result was: promoted by Mentoz86 (talk) 09:24, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
Laura Basuki
edit- ... that Laura Basuki, who had an award-winning role as Catholic, has been compared to Japanese AV idol Maria Ozawa?
- ALT1:... that Laura Basuki wanted to be a doctor, but was pressured to be a model instead?
- ALT2:... that model Laura Basuki only bathed weekly while East of the Sun?
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Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 12:27, 12 June 2012 (UTC)
Article's in good shape and the hook facts are all cited. However, I'm not really sure about the first and third hooks—I don't see the relevance of specificying she played a Catholic in the first hook, as the context of that being noteworthy is the interfaith relationship of the film, which isn't mentioned in the hook. Perhaps "... that Citra Award-winning actress Laura Basuki has been compared to Japanese AV idol Maria Ozawa?" might be more to the point. As for the third hook, given that there is currently no article for the film in question (get on it, man) it might be worth clarifying that it's a film; if there was a link to follow that made that clear the hook would be fine as is but it might seem confusing otherwise. FWIW, the middle one is totally fine as is. GRAPPLE X 15:16, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
- Also, I'm only trusting Google Translate for this, but id:Wikipedia:Permintaan izin/kapanlagi.com seems to allow the use of id:Berkas:Laura Basuki.jpg in the article with proper accreditation, though that would probably rule it out for use in the hook. GRAPPLE X 15:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
- I've asked about the KapanLagi.com license, but it's essentially "permission for use in Wikipedia", which is not allowed. If we allowed it my life would be much easier. Your ALT is fine. Regarding the film... well, I have an 18k monster that I'm nowhere near completing yet. May do the film if I take a breather, seems to be garnishing lots of attention. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:59, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
- I'd link Citra Award though. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:04, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that Citra Award-winning actress Laura Basuki has been compared to Japanese AV idol Maria Ozawa?
- Does this then need someone else to sign off on it or should it be fine between the two of us? GRAPPLE X 22:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
- Since all you're doing is suggesting an ALT, I think we're fine without a third opinion. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:41, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
- Does this then need someone else to sign off on it or should it be fine between the two of us? GRAPPLE X 22:24, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that Citra Award-winning actress Laura Basuki has been compared to Japanese AV idol Maria Ozawa?
- I'd link Citra Award though. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:04, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
- I've asked about the KapanLagi.com license, but it's essentially "permission for use in Wikipedia", which is not allowed. If we allowed it my life would be much easier. Your ALT is fine. Regarding the film... well, I have an 18k monster that I'm nowhere near completing yet. May do the film if I take a breather, seems to be garnishing lots of attention. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:59, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
- Also, I'm only trusting Google Translate for this, but id:Wikipedia:Permintaan izin/kapanlagi.com seems to allow the use of id:Berkas:Laura Basuki.jpg in the article with proper accreditation, though that would probably rule it out for use in the hook. GRAPPLE X 15:19, 14 June 2012 (UTC)
