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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:26, 4 September 2013 (UTC)

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Created by Bonkers The Clown (talk). Self nominated at 10:15, 24 August 2013 (UTC).

  • Everything looks good to go, though the first sentence under the plot summery seems a little confusing to me. Also, it may not be necessary to mention "It was directed by Lesley Selander" in Production and Release, given that this is mentioned in the articles opening line. Robvanvee 17:35, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
It basically means that Vance Daley has the same romantic interest as Monte Hale and is also his opposition at work (e.g. Daley works at company x which compete's with Hale's company y. If it appears at the lead it most definitely should reappear at the body, only this time with citations. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 10:32, 2 September 2013 (UTC)
  • "Monte Hale meets his match in both love and profession, private buyer Vance Daley..." sounded to me like Vance was his love interest. Perhaps just the way I read it. The reason I mentioned omitting Lesley Selander's directing the second time was because reference no2 cites his direction whereas reference no3 (as far as I could see) doesn't. Page 11 of reference no3 (again, as far as I could see-maybe I missed it) only mentions the theater and times it was showing. I also couldn't find anything on page 11 of the old newspaper referring to the Bob Steele claim? I agree about it being in the lead and cited in the body. Robvanvee 13:06, 2 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Ref No. 3 doesn't convey it in words, rather there is this hard-to-notice advertisement flashing the line "Bob Steele in Last Frontier Uprising" (paraphrasing). I have moved the references to cite the directorial stuff. Cheers, ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 14:06, 2 September 2013 (UTC)
  • I couldn't find that line you are referring to on page 11 but did find it here on page 20 under the "next week" section. Robvanvee 17:03, 2 September 2013 (UTC)
In that case, good to go! Robvanvee 14:15, 3 September 2013 (UTC)
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