Template:Did you know nominations/Lake Rawa Pening

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 14:13, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

Lake Rawa Pening edit

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... that Lake Rawa Pening may dry up within the next ten years?

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 06:24, 1 September 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: Buster Warenski

Age, length, sources, neutrality are fine. No copyvio, plagiarism or close paraphrasing. Hook is OK. The article could stand some beefing up - it looks like there is a lot more in the sources than included here and it reads a bit strangely when the second sentence of the lead is repeated two sentences later. Yomangani ^talk 16:54, 1 September 2011 (UTC)

There's an origin legend, but I couldn't find anything I consider reliable. Don't know if some of the websites could be considered reliable. Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:22, 2 September 2011 (UTC)