Template:Did you know nominations/Krissia Beatty

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:12, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

Krissia Beatty edit

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... that Miss Utah 2015 Krissia Beatty is the fifth person in her family, after her mother, grandmother, and two aunts, to have been crowned Miss Washington County?

Reviewed: United News of India

Created by Dravecky (talk). Self-nominated at 20:44, 29 July 2015 (UTC).

looks good! I might change the hook to "after her mother, grandmother and two aunts". "including" reads a bit oddly. Ironholds (talk) 05:25, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

You're right, that is better. Changing it now. - Dravecky (talk) 07:00, 30 July 2015 (UTC)