Template:Did you know nominations/Konrad Bernheimer

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:10, 10 December 2015 (UTC)

Konrad Bernheimer edit

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Bernheimer-Haus, Munich

... that Konrad Bernheimer was born in Venezuela after the Bernheimer-Haus (pictured) was damaged on Kristallnacht, the family went to Dachau and Hermann Göring made them buy his niece's plantation and take his aunt and her Jewish husband?

Reviewed: Doris Calloway
Comment: That hook might be a bit too long - any help in tightening it up would be appreciated. Or why not try to come up with an alternative?

Created by Edwardx (talk). Self-nominated at 23:55, 27 November 2015 (UTC).

*ALT1 ...that Konrad Bernheimer was born in Venezuela rather than Germany after his grandfather made a deal with Hermann Göring to flee Germany after initially being sent to Dachau concentration camp? Philafrenzy (talk) 00:43, 28 November 2015 (UTC)

ALT2 ...that art dealer Konrad Bernheimer was born in Venezuela after his grandfather made a deal with Hermann Göring to allow the family to flee Germany? Philafrenzy (talk) 00:57, 2 December 2015 (UTC)

New enough (completed work same day as nom), large enough (2300 bytes readable), neutral, well cited, and Earwig check comes up clean. The original hook is a few characters over the limit, but Philafrenzy's ALT2 is short enough and cited. That does mean that we have to drop the image though. There is a QPQ, and although the review was finished by someone else, I am pretty sure it still counts. I changed "did" to "made" in the ALT. The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 21:34, 5 December 2015 (UTC)