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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 23:19, 25 October 2012 (UTC)
Kids' meal edit
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- ... that legislators in Arizona have banned bans on toys accompanying kids' meals?
- Reviewed: Portrait of the Duchess of Alba
Created/expanded by Goodvac (talk). Self nom at 21:39, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
- Has a readable prose size of 2896 B (469 words), up from 375 B (69 words) when Goodvac began to expand the article on 2012-10-22 (expanded nearly eight times). All references appear to be from reliable sources (they're all well-known news agencies). All statements are accompanied with inline references. CüRlyTüRkeyTalkContribs 00:38, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
Shouldn't the hook be "... that legislators in Arizona and Florida have banned bans ontoys accompanying kids' meals?"--Redtigerxyz Talk 17:26, 23 October 2012 (UTC)- Nope, the point is that the bans have been banned. I'm removing the good to go tick though. The article doesn't actually say that the bans were banned, it said legislators have pursued bans and the sources mention the legislation in Arizona passing through the house, but does not state if the legislation has been enacted. Ryan Vesey 17:46, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
- Got confused. :) May be the fact that Chile has banned toys in the meal can be used for the hook. --Redtigerxyz Talk 17:58, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for catching that. I've reworked that sentence in the article and modified the hook accordingly. Goodvac (talk) 22:47, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
- Nope, the point is that the bans have been banned. I'm removing the good to go tick though. The article doesn't actually say that the bans were banned, it said legislators have pursued bans and the sources mention the legislation in Arizona passing through the house, but does not state if the legislation has been enacted. Ryan Vesey 17:46, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
