- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 09:00, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
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Kebyar duduk edit
... that, in the Balinese dance kebyar duduk (pictured), dancers complete their routines while seated or half-seated?
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Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nominated at 11:17, 22 November 2014 (UTC).
Nice new article, but I think the hook could be made more interesting. There's plenty of interesting material in the article, such as the androgynous-looking male dancer wearing a fabric decorated with a prada. -Zanhe (talk) 02:30, 25 November 2014 (UTC)
- I thought "sitting while dancing" was interesting enough, but okay:
- ALT1: ... that in the Balinese dance kebyar duduk (pictured), androgynously made-up men spin in circles while seated or half-seated? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:29, 25 November 2014 (UTC)
- Needs a ref for the "androgynous" bit in the article. I'm not sure if it's from Suardana or McIntosh. -Zanhe (talk) 03:46, 25 November 2014 (UTC)
- Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:41, 25 November 2014 (UTC)
- Needs a ref for the "androgynous" bit in the article. I'm not sure if it's from Suardana or McIntosh. -Zanhe (talk) 03:46, 25 November 2014 (UTC)
