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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Mifter (talk) 20:05, 12 February 2017 (UTC)

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  • ... that Karin Barber, a British anthropologist, started her academia career by teaching in Yoruba at the University of Ife in Nigeria? Source: "Career: Lectr, Dept of African Langs and Lits, Univ. of Ife" (Who's Who 2017); "University of Ife, where Yoruba was used as the teaching medium" (University of Birmingham biography)
    • ALT1:... that Karin Barber, a British anthropologist, started her academia career by teaching at the University of Ife where the language of instruction is Yoruba?
    • ALT2:... that Karin Barber, a British anthropologist, received prizes for all three of her monographs?
    • ALT3:... that the British anthropologist Karin Barber received four different prizes for four different books?
    • ALT1a:... that the British anthropologist Karin Barber started her academic career by teaching at the University of Ife, where the language of instruction is Yoruba?

Created by Gaia Octavia Agrippa (talk). Self-nominated at 23:46, 6 February 2017 (UTC).

  • New enough, long enough, neutral, sourced, interesting, passes duplication detector checks (matches to titles of books, awards, universities and positions held are detected, which is acceptable). All hooks are within acceptable length. Facts for ALT and ALT1 are stated and cited in the article. They might read more smoothly if they say "that British anthropologist Karin Barber ..." Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 16:30, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
  • Regarding ALT2, four books are mentioned and cited as having received awards, but none of them are explicitly identified in the article as monographs, so I would recommend rephrasing either ALT2 or the article if ALT2 is considered. My hook preference is for ALT1, which I think is the catchiest. Otherwise, the only outstanding requirement is that the QPQ is not yet completed. Thanks for writing this article about a very interesting person and her work. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 16:27, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
  • Thank you for your review! I have reworded ALT2 as ALT3 and have added ALT4 to reflect your recommendations. I have also added some more details to the article and a new paragraph in the intro. I am currently looking at QPQ. Gaia Octavia Agrippa Talk 17:53, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
  • Great! I'm striking the hook versions that have been modified, and taking the liberty of naming ALT4 as ALT1a to clarify its line of descent. Confirming that both ALT3 and ALT1a are properly cited and supported. Let me know when the QPQ is done. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 18:40, 7 February 2017 (UTC)
@Mary Mark Ockerbloom: and now its done, Gaia Octavia Agrippa Talk 01:07, 8 February 2017 (UTC)
ALT 1a is best; ALT 3 is boring. Neutralitytalk 20:08, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
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