- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:48, 26 June 2021 (UTC)
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Justin Clarke
... that following severe injury and the demise of his professional AFL career, Justin Clarke turned Rhodes scholar in 2021? Source: University of Queensland https://www.uq.edu.au/news/article/2020/10/former-lion-turned-student-queensland%E2%80%99s-newest-rhodes-scholarALT1:... that former Queensland professional AFL player Justin Clarke was selected as Rhode scholar? Source: https://www.uq.edu.au/news/article/2020/10/former-lion-turned-student-queensland%E2%80%99s-newest-rhodes-scholarALT2:... that #nobrainnogame campaigner, ex-AFL professional,Justin Clarke turned Rhode scholar in 2021? Source: University of Queensland https://www.uq.edu.au/news/article/2020/10/former-lion-turned-student-queensland%E2%80%99s-newest-rhodes-scholar
- ALT0a: ... that following a career-ending injury from Australian rules football, Justin Clarke turned Rhodes scholar in 2021?
5x expanded by JayKayWags (talk) and Carrolquadrio (talk). Nominated by Carrolquadrio (talk) at 05:49, 31 May 2021 (UTC).
Definitely a 5x expansion, well sourced throughout, every paragraph has citations. The article is written neutrally and is well written, an interesting read, and that makes for interesting hooks. I don't like your ALT0 much and so propose 0a in its place. I'll approve any variation of that hook. Earwig says copyvio is unlikely, and – Muboshgu (talk) 05:15, 18 June 2021 (UTC)- I forgot about QPQ. JayKayWags has no DYKs and Carrolquadrio has one, so this is exempt from QPQ. – Muboshgu (talk) 19:05, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
- Muboshgu, thanks so much. I agree with ALT0a as an improvement. Also, I would be happy to review DYK's in future.Carrolquadrio (talk) 0152, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
- Great, crossing out the other hooks then. Also I'm assuming that "turned Rhodes scholar" is grammatical in Aussie English. My American English brain would prefer "became a Rhodes scholar", but this hook should use Australian English. Carrolquadrio, you are encouraged to review DYK nominations as long as you understand the criteria. Once you reach five DYK credits, then QPQ reviews become mandatory. – Muboshgu (talk) 01:59, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
- Muboshgu use 'became a Rhodes scholar', it is more exact. Carrolquadrio (talk) 04:21, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
- Great, crossing out the other hooks then. Also I'm assuming that "turned Rhodes scholar" is grammatical in Aussie English. My American English brain would prefer "became a Rhodes scholar", but this hook should use Australian English. Carrolquadrio, you are encouraged to review DYK nominations as long as you understand the criteria. Once you reach five DYK credits, then QPQ reviews become mandatory. – Muboshgu (talk) 01:59, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
- Muboshgu, thanks so much. I agree with ALT0a as an improvement. Also, I would be happy to review DYK's in future.Carrolquadrio (talk) 0152, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
