Template:Did you know nominations/John Harvey Kellogg

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 02:41, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
Article was not sufficiently expanded, and a recent GA nomination was not listed; should it ever succeed at GAN it can again be nominated here as noted in the review.

John Harvey Kellogg edit

  • Kellogg published The Uses of Water in Health & Disease where he detailed the benefits of hydropathy. The chemical and physical properties of water lent its ability for its healing properties including cooling functions for fevers and functions as a tonic among many other functions. Kellogg believed in the curative properties of water, but disapproved it as a "one-size fits all" property. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Diegoluytoto (talkcontribs) 21:42, 21 March 2017 (UTC)
  • ... that John Harvey Kellogg, the physician who invented the famous corn flakes, was both a vegetarian and strongly against caffeine in any form?

Created/expanded by ArjavS (talk), Vfang3 (talk), Diegoluytoto (talk). Nominated by ArjavS (talk) at 00:25, 10 March 2017 (UTC).

  • ... that John Harvey Kellogg, most famous for his invention of corn flakes, also patented and invented medical devices for light, vibration, and massage therapies?
  • Expanded a lot, but not x5 - it was 35k on crude byte-count before (though with long quotes), & is now 61K. Lots of citation needed tags. Next time please don't do different ALTs for different editors (especially when the biggest single addition is by neither of you two), & link & bold the subject in the nom. Some added material might be better at Battle Creek Sanitarium. Johnbod (talk) 16:01, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
@ArjavS and Vfang3: Unfortunately, this article was too long to begin with for a 5x expansion to be feasible. If you really want it to be featured in DYK, you could try to improve it to Good Article status and then nominate it here afterwards.
@Johnbod: FYI, you need to use the DYK check tool to get the readable prose length. The length on the History tab counts all characters, including invisible markup, and does not reflect the length of readable prose. For this article the expansion was from 13,945 characters to 29,676 characters, still far short of a 5x expansion. See Rule A3 for details. Antony–22 (talkcontribs) 03:51, 12 March 2017 (UTC)
I know that, doh. But this clearly didn't make it. Johnbod (talk) 03:58, 12 March 2017 (UTC)
Just making sure. :-) Antony–22 (talkcontribs) 04:04, 12 March 2017 (UTC)