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The result was: promoted by feminist (talk) 14:50, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
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Javan frogmouth edit
- ... that the Javan frogmouth may be more common than
isgenerally thought? Source: "Generally considered uncommon throughout this range, and the population on Java is particularly scarce ... but it is likely to be under-recorded throughout [its range]."
- Reviewed: James Raymond Lawson
5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 19:20, 29 December 2017 (UTC).
Date, length, age, and everything else checks out. I just have a quick question about the hook: Would it read better to say "may be more common than generally thought"? Is the "is" entirely necessary? I apologize if this is super obvious. Aoba47 (talk) 22:05, 29 December 2017 (UTC)
- @Aoba47: I'm fine without the "is" and have struck it in the hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:35, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
