- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:30, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
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Jason Fettig
- ... that Donald Trump's official musical adviser is Col. Jason Fettig (pictured)?
- ... that the first military promotion personally performed by President of the United States Donald Trump was to advance Jason Fettig (pictured) to the rank of colonel?
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ForthcomingTemplate:Did you know nominations/Kris Knoblauch
Created by Chetsford (talk). Self-nominated at 05:58, 2 August 2019 (UTC).
Article is long enough and in date, no copyvio detected. Hooks are cited and article meets policies. Image is claimed as freeuse. Looks good to go, pending QPQ. As a sidenote on the hooks, I'd prefer active voice, to make the fact about the subject, rather than the relation to Trump. And also to avoid the abbreviation of Col. for those who might not be familiar with military ranks. So something along the lines of:
- ALT2 ... that Colonel Jason Fettig (pictured) is Donald Trump's official musical adviser?
- ALT3 ... that Jason Fettig's (pictured) advancement to colonel was the first military promotion personally performed by Donald Trump? Spokoyni (talk) 12:35, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks Spokoyni! The QPQ is done now. I very much prefer your suggested Alts to the original ones. Chetsford (talk) 20:44, 2 August 2019 (UTC)