Template:Did you know nominations/Jörg Breiding

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:13, 18 August 2019 (UTC)

Jörg Breiding

Jörg Breiding in 2015
Jörg Breiding in 2015

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 12:22, 18 July 2019 (UTC).

  • The article is long enough and new enough. I assume good faith on the non-English references. A QPQ is complete and the image is fine. The hook is cited. My only problem is that I'm not sure if "in its long tradition" is needed in the hook. SL93 (talk) 22:04, 8 August 2019 (UTC)
Define "needed". I think it adds to know that the founder and his predecessor was leader for a long time, and carefully selected who would be next. If we just say "second", he could have come after a few years, with no reputation established. Better wording welcome. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:09, 8 August 2019 (UTC)
It just seemed like it makes the hook too wordy, but I will pass this. SL93 (talk) 22:12, 8 August 2019 (UTC)