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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 16:41, 1 January 2021 (UTC)

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Industry Bar

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  • ... that Industry replaced a parking garage? Source: "... the 'raw, sexy space' will be turned into something so innovative you'll forget it was a parking garage." ([1])
    • ALT1:... that Industry faces Therapy? Source: "The bar is on the first floor of a Bauhaus-style office building on West 52nd Street, across from another gay bar, Therapy." ([2])

Improved to Good Article status by Armadillopteryx (talk) and Another Believer (talk). Nominated by Armadillopteryx (talk) at 23:20, 11 December 2020 (UTC).

  • Comment: I am unable to review this since I am reviewing two GA nominations. However looking at the first hook, I think we can have an image of the front entrance. That way, it'll be like ...that Industry (pictured) replaced a parking garage? and then readers would look at the front entrance and be like: This used to be a parking garage? GeraldWL (Pine wish!) 05:07, 12 December 2020 (UTC)
    I think the fun/quirkiness of the first hook rests on the fact that the reader doesn't know what "Industry" refers to, as that word has many possible meanings in English. But, yes, there are pictures available if helpful. Armadillopteryx 18:27, 12 December 2020 (UTC)
  • GA received within 7 days of nomination. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. Images are freely licensed. QPQ done.
  • IMO this is not an AFD hook. The first hook is much too ambiguous, and the ALT1 makes a good quirky for all year. Besides, the high school humor and sex jokes will probably take over the AFD section as usual. I am approving ALT1, hook ref verified and cited inline. Yoninah (talk) 23:22, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
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