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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 21:21, 20 October 2011 (UTC)
India Song edit
- ... that actor Michel Lonsdale considers India Song to be his "most favorite role"?
- Reviewed: Konrad Jarnot
Created/expanded by Grapple X (talk). Self nom at 00:53, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
- Hook: Short enough, but I disagree with the wording. The role was the character, not the film. Perhaps ALT1: ... that actor Michel Lonsdale favourite role was in India Song? Hook fact checks out.
- Article: Long enough, new enough. Paraphrasing seems fine. Referencing is thorough.
- Summary:
We just need to hammer out a good hook. Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:02, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
- How about "... that actor Michel Lonsdale's favourite role was in India Song?" - just adding in the possessive there. GRAPPLE X 21:36, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
(baaaa). Okay, ALT2 good to go. Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:54, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
- How about "... that actor Michel Lonsdale's favourite role was in India Song?" - just adding in the possessive there. GRAPPLE X 21:36, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
