Template:Did you know nominations/Hubele Mounds and Village Site
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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 01:21, 21 April 2013 (UTC).
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Hubele Mounds and Village Site edit
- ... that scholarly estimates for the dates of southeastern Illinois' Hubele archaeological site vary by 1,400 years from earliest to latest?
- Reviewed: René Maturana
- Comment: Hook depends on multiple pieces in the "Cultural affiliation" section. The earliest date is from the second sentence, which suggests a date as early as 400 BC, while the latest date is from the middle of the paragraph, where a date of AD 1000 is suggested.
Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nominated at 03:40, 20 April 2013 (UTC).
Date, size, neutrality are fine, but the hook is not stated clearly in the text. I suggest repeating the hook line in the lead with added references. Ping me for a rereview. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:04, 20 April 2013 (UTC)
- Expanded. No need for a citation there because it's cited elsewhere. Nyttend (talk) 15:54, 20 April 2013 (UTC)
Should be good now, I'll AGF that the claim (which seems uncontroversial) is covered in the article. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 18:07, 20 April 2013 (UTC)
