- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Gatoclass (talk) 04:01, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
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Hilda Hanbury
Cigarette card as Mrs. Clarence in the comedy A Message from Mars (1900)
- ... that actress Hilda Hanbury was regarded as a "stage beauty" and appeared on cigarette cards? Source: Portrait of Miss Hilda Hanbury, The Sketch, 22 September 1897, p 359 + https://www.npg.org.uk/collections/search/portrait/mw263542/Hilda-Louise-Hanbury?LinkID=mp153056&role=sit&rNo=0
- ALT1: ... that actress Hilda Hanbury was regarded as a "stage beauty" and appeared on cigarette cards (pictured)? Source: same as ALT0
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Patsy Torres
Created by Jack1956 (talk). Nominated by Paul2520 (talk) at 16:23, 5 June 2022 (UTC).
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Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
- Some of the sourcing does not appear to be from reliable sources: see stagebeauty.net, ancestry.com, a cigarette card? There seem to be a fair amount of either OR or SYNTH. - Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Hook eligibility:
- Cited: - I don't understand the citation? Is this citing the cigarette card?
- Interesting:
| Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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Overall: 
A few issues with sourcing need to be sorted out before this goes further. I don't find the hook especially interesting but this is a secondary issue. Vladimir.copic (talk) 03:01, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- Draft comment (I'll add more in the next few days): I updated the source on the hook. It should have been the URL where the image comes from, not the file URL. So no, not citing the image itself.
- ALT2: ... that actress Hilda Hanbury and her sister learned to ride bicycles in 1897, which was unusual for women of the time?
- Source: https://www.newspapers.com/clip/1214391/hilda-hanbury-1897/
- Thoughts? paul2520 💬 03:40, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- It's marginally more interesting but was it really unusual for women of the time? The source doesn't say so and even mentions other women bicycle riders? Vladimir.copic (talk) 04:17, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that actress Hilda Hanbury is the grandmother of actors James and Edward Fox and the great-grandmother of actress Emilia Fox?
- Hilda Hanbury – Paul2520 (give) (tag) – View nom subpage Source: https://www.whodoyouthinkyouaremagazine.com/episode/emilia-fox/ Source: https://www.thegenealogist.co.uk/featuredarticles/2011/who-do-you-think-you-are/emilia-fox-65/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dreamspy (talk • contribs)
- ALT3 looks good. Just need some of my concerns about sourcing to be fixed. Vladimir.copic (talk) 23:09, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- I have removed the link to Ancestry.com. The ‘cigarette card’ referenced is actually linked to an image in the National Portrait Gallery Collection - the UK’s national collection of notable British people Dreamspy (talk)<
- Sorry for being a pedant but I still see a WP:PRIMARY issue with the use of a census to source the following: Fox was of independent means and the couple settled down to a comfortable life in Mayfair in a 16 room house with nine servants. Vladimir.copic (talk) 01:54, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- I can remove the source but how else can I provide a reference for the information? Dreamspy (talk) 05:07, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- Any interpretation of the information from the census needs to be removed. If you look at WP:PRIMARY, it explains that the use of a primary source is ok for simple facts but interpreting them is not. I assume that Fox was of independent means and the couple settled down to a comfortable life in... is not information given in the census. Vladimir.copic (talk) 22:54, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- OK. I have removed the ancestry.com reference and moved another to cover the “independent means” bit. Dreamspy (talk) 23:05, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
Happy to accept this sourcing in good faith as I can’t watch the TV show source. Approving only ALT3. Vladimir.copic (talk) 12:19, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
- OK. I have removed the ancestry.com reference and moved another to cover the “independent means” bit. Dreamspy (talk) 23:05, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- Any interpretation of the information from the census needs to be removed. If you look at WP:PRIMARY, it explains that the use of a primary source is ok for simple facts but interpreting them is not. I assume that Fox was of independent means and the couple settled down to a comfortable life in... is not information given in the census. Vladimir.copic (talk) 22:54, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- I can remove the source but how else can I provide a reference for the information? Dreamspy (talk) 05:07, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- Sorry for being a pedant but I still see a WP:PRIMARY issue with the use of a census to source the following: Fox was of independent means and the couple settled down to a comfortable life in Mayfair in a 16 room house with nine servants. Vladimir.copic (talk) 01:54, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- I have removed the link to Ancestry.com. The ‘cigarette card’ referenced is actually linked to an image in the National Portrait Gallery Collection - the UK’s national collection of notable British people Dreamspy (talk)<
- ALT3 looks good. Just need some of my concerns about sourcing to be fixed. Vladimir.copic (talk) 23:09, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
