Template:Did you know nominations/Helen Desha Beamer

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 11:57, 19 July 2012 (UTC)

Helen Desha Beamer edit

Created/expanded by Maile66 (talk). Self nom at 01:31, 16 July 2012 (UTC)

  • Length, date, citations etc all fine. Could the hook be reworded, perhaps by removing reference to Columbia, to make clear that it was the first recording for any record company? i.e.
ALT1 ... that Helen Desha Beamer and Sam Kapu made the first commercial recording of the Hawaiian Wedding Song in 1928? - Basement12 (T.C) 22:20, 18 July 2012 (UTC)
Yes, I agree. I'm fine with ALT1 Maile66 (talk) 22:36, 18 July 2012 (UTC)