- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:16, 30 May 2017 (UTC)
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H. J. de Graaf edit
- ... that H. J. de Graaf was called the "father of the study of Javanese history" by the historian M. C. Ricklefs?
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Created by HaEr48 (talk). Self-nominated at 06:25, 18 May 2017 (UTC).
- Going to review this, but not immediately --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:02, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
Interesting detailed life, on good sources, JSTOR accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The hook is interesting and a good summary. - Please go over the article for some recurring issues:
- The last two digits of a year get repeated in constructions such as 1904–07, not only the last.
- The name of the subject should be repeated 1) at the beginning of each section, 2) instead of "he" when it's not clear who "he" is, for example when another man is mentioned, and then you say "his wife".
- Check that "ref" comes right after a fact, no space.
- Check for too complicated sentences, better split.
- If you have to mention a thing twice, like dissertation or marriage, don't repeat word by word.
- Write more lead, please. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:37, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks, Gerda Arendt. I made updates to the article to address your feedback. Let me know if there's anything further I can improve. HaEr48 (talk) 06:20, 25 May 2017 (UTC)
thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:18, 25 May 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks, Gerda Arendt. I made updates to the article to address your feedback. Let me know if there's anything further I can improve. HaEr48 (talk) 06:20, 25 May 2017 (UTC)
