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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 21:33, 22 April 2013 (UTC).

Guatemala City sinkhole (2010)

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... that Tropical Storm Agatha caused a 30-story deep sinkhole to open in 2010 in Guatemala City, killing 15 people?

Created by 069952497a (talk). Self nominated at 22:28, 21 April 2013 (UTC).

Yeah, this is all good: references, size, newness, etc. I wonder about the hook, though. The thing is a mammoth, according to one of the sources. It's 30 stories deep--I think that should be in the hook. (BTW, I didn't realize how tall 30 stories is until I saw the pictures.) Drmies (talk) 04:58, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that Tropical Storm Agatha caused a 30-story deep sinkhole to open in 2010 in Guatemala City?

There seems to be a lot of information that can be included. The fatalities should be included as well. Perhaps this?

... that Tropical Storm Agatha caused a 30-story deep sinkhole to open in 2010 in Guatemala City, killing 15 people? 069952497a^{Comments and complaints}_{Stuff I've done} 12:10, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

I tried that one but wasn't sure about the grammar of it--but it's really not ambiguous, so I'm checking this off. Thanks! Drmies (talk) 14:00, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

Thanks! 069952497a^{Comments and complaints}_{Stuff I've done} 20:25, 22 April 2013 (UTC)