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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 23:36, 1 November 2017 (UTC)

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  • ... that Mexican construction firm Grupo Garza Ponce created the first private industrial park in Nuevo León, Mexico? Source: "Spanish: Ya desde la década de los ochentas, el Grupo GP fue pionero al desarrollar el primer parque industrial privado en Nuevo León" / English: "In the 1980s, the GP Group was a pioneer and developed the first private industrial park in Nuevo Leon" (Milenio)

5x expanded by MX (talk). Self-nominated at 14:29, 10 October 2017 (UTC).

  • This is a prime example of an article that should never have gone to AfD and which has since been improved substantially by MX. Great job! It is a fivefold expansion and is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are sourced inline and the article is neutral. I do not speak Spanish well enough to check for copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:49, 19 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Hi, I do think you can do better with this hook. If you could provide a cite for being "one of the largest construction firms in Mexico", I would suggest:
  • ALT1: ... that Grupo Garza Ponce, now one of the largest construction firms in Mexico, had to change its business model every month during the 1982 debt crisis?
  • Or:
  • ALT2: ... that in 2013 Grupo Garza Ponce built the first Tadao Ando Japanese architecture construction in Mexico? Yoninah (talk) 23:47, 19 October 2017 (UTC)
  • I love ALT1! The "largest" claim is found in the last sentence of paragraph 2 of section "2011–2015". El Norte stated that Grupo Garza Ponce was the eighth largest construction firm in Mexico and one of the most important ones in northern Mexico (source: Grupo GP es la octava constructora más grande del País ... y una de las más importantes en el norte del País). MX (✉ • ✎) 23:59, 19 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Great, I'm glad that's all sourced. Since I wrote ALT1, I'm calling on another reviewer to approve it. Pinging @Cwmhiraeth:. Yoninah (talk) 00:08, 20 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Approving ALT1 which is well-cited. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:11, 20 October 2017 (UTC)
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