Template:Did you know nominations/Gene Ritchie Monahan

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:37, 8 April 2019 (UTC)

Gene Ritchie Monahan edit

Created by Eehrenhals (talk). Nominated by Paul2520 (talk) at 16:26, 16 March 2019 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: created on March 9, 2019, 4199 characters, neutral, sourced, no COPYVIO, and QPQ is completed. ALT0 is sourced but can we add Carl Ray and list the names in alphabetical order, by last name, to avoid close paraphrasing, here and in the article. Also it is better to begin by saying "that Minnesotan artist Gene Ritchie Monahan is known for her portraits of...". ALT1 is fine but would be better if it attributed the quote directly to Sigurd Olson. --- Coffeeandcrumbs 01:14, 17 March 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, Coffeeandcrumbs. I updated the hooks per your helpful comments. = paul2520 (talk) 14:45, 17 March 2019 (UTC)
All good to go. --- Coffeeandcrumbs 18:09, 17 March 2019 (UTC)