Template:Did you know nominations/Freddy Galvis

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 18:57, 3 March 2015 (UTC)

Freddy Galvis

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Galvis before a game in 2013

5x expanded by Go Phightins! (talk). Self nominated at 02:48, 18 February 2015 (UTC).

  • @Go Phightins!:, I like the idea of the hook. Perhaps make it about the fact that he was noticed by scouts and subsequently signed by the Phillies at the age of 16. Otherwise, it's ready to go. Length is good, images meet the guidelines, etc. Sportsguy17 (TC) 19:27, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
  • OK, how about:

for ALT 1. Galvis was some very exceptional talent for his age I must say. Sportsguy17 (TC) 03:17, 19 February 2015 (UTC)

  • @Sportsguy17: this review needs more than a check of the hook, article length, and image. You should provide a review that explicitly confirms that the five main DYK criteria have been covered. Yoninah (talk) 11:18, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
  • . Making sure that this DYK nomination met the DYK criterion is a given. But just for clarity's sake, it meets all five of the criterion and is all good to go. Sportsguy17 (TC) 23:40, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
  • Thank you! Yoninah (talk) 00:02, 20 February 2015 (UTC)