Template:Did you know nominations/Frank Newman (educator)

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 18:20, 5 February 2013 (UTC)

Frank Newman (educator) edit

Created by Carcharoth (talk). Self nom at 01:15, 26 January 2013 (UTC)

  • Long/new enough. Amply sourced, and the hook is mentioned and verified in the article. I have only two minor hold-ups on this hook: 1. "President" should not be capitalized, it should be "president", and 2. the hook should probably say "...was made a High Officer..." since that is how the source names him. Jrcla2 (talk) 19:30, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
    • Thanks, I've amended the hook as suggested. Our article on the Order of Prince Henry (Ordem do Infante Dom Henrique) gives the levels, but doesn't mention 'High Officer', only 'Grand Officer'. I have tried to find sources to clarify this, but without success. Carcharoth (talk) 00:00, 5 February 2013 (UTC)
      • Changes made. Good. Jrcla2 (talk) 02:56, 5 February 2013 (UTC)