Template:Did you know nominations/First Flights with Neil Armstrong (TV series)

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:22, 3 July 2016 (UTC)

First Flights with Neil Armstrong (TV series), Neil Armstrong edit

Armstrong, 26, as a test pilot.
Armstrong, 26, as a test pilot.

Created by Benjamin Porter (talk) and Mr leroy playpus (talk). Nominated by Mr leroy playpus (talk) at 17:07, 21 June 2016 (UTC).

  • The article is new: Green tickY
  • The article is long enough: Green tickY
  • The hook is interesting: Green tickY
  • The hook is referenced: Green tickY
  • The hook is below 200 characters: Green tickY
  • A google search does not reveal any copyright violation: Green tickY
  • The article follows most other important policies: Green tickY
  • QPQ: Green tickY (new user)
  • Article seems good to go. My only concern was that the article does not explain who is Neil Armstrong, to give context, but taking into account that we are talking about a man whose name is written down in human history, we can easily leave it as it is. The sky is blue, after all. By the way, I moved the article from "First Flights with Neil Armstrong (TV series)" to just "First Flights with Neil Armstrong", as there is no other article with that name, and so the DAB is not needed. Cambalachero (talk) 16:06, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
  • The hook has to be mentioned in the article, and I've added a mention of Armstrong's background as a test pilot to the article. What I also added to the article is the elephant in the room, if we are assuming not all readers know the name Neil Armstrong. He was also the first human being to walk on the moon. Don't suppose anybody wants a hook with that in it. — Maile (talk) 19:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)