Template:Did you know nominations/Feast of the Gods (art)

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 00:04, 25 October 2013 (UTC)

Feast of the Gods (art) edit

A group of largely nude figures, with a table to the rear

  • ... that painting a Feast of the Gods (example illustrated) allowed artists to show a generous range of nude figures, in complicated poses that displayed their virtuosity?

Created by Johnbod (talk). Self nominated at 22:47, 17 October 2013 (UTC).

  • All good re creation date, lenght and that. Image is free. Not crazy about the word "complicated" in the hook; "in poses that emphasise their physicality and virtuosity". Ceoil (talk) 11:18, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
The figures have physicality, the artist shows virtuosity, so I don't think that works. Is "complex" any better? Johnbod (talk) 12:48, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
Fine, thats good, but maybe make clearer that the "their" refers to the artists not the subjects. Very nice article overall. Ceoil (talk) 14:03, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ... that painting a Feast of the Gods (example illustrated) allowed artists to display their virtuosity by showing a generous range of nude figures in complicated poses? Johnbod (talk) 16:35, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
Good to go here. Ceoil (talk) 16:53, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
Thanks - can you add the ticky symbol thing. Johnbod (talk) 13:46, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
Done. Ceoil (talk) 20:08, 24 October 2013 (UTC)