Template:Did you know nominations/Experimental Jet Set, Trash and No Star
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 13:29, 26 May 2015 (UTC)
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Experimental Jet Set, Trash and No Star edit
- ... that the American rock band Sonic Youth claimed that their 1994 album Experimental Jet Set, Trash and No Star was recorded over the master tapes of their 1987 album Sister to save costs and that it is possible to hear some parts of Sister during quiet sections of the final recording?
Improved to Good Article status by Niwi3 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:36, 13 May 2015 (UTC).
New good article status checked. Nominator has only one previous DYK so no QPQ needed. Hook verified from sources. However, the hook is too long (approximately 284 characters). Can it be tightened down, please? —David Eppstein (talk) 00:16, 25 May 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review. What do you think about this one: "...that it is possible to hear some pats of Sonic Youth's 1987 album Sister during quiet sections of the band's 1994 album Experimental Jet Set, Trash and No Star because it was recorded over the same master tapes." Thanks. --Niwi3 (talk) 10:13, 25 May 2015 (UTC)
- Still too long, but maybe you would be ok with
- ALT1 ... that one can hear parts of Sonic Youth's 1987 album Sister in quiet sections of the band's 1994 album Experimental Jet Set, Trash and No Star, because it was recorded over the same master tapes?
- —David Eppstein (talk) 18:03, 25 May 2015 (UTC)
- Sounds good to me. I cannot think of any other way to simplify it further. Thanks for the suggestion. --Niwi3 (talk) 18:12, 25 May 2015 (UTC)
Ok, good to go with ALT1. —David Eppstein (talk) 19:38, 25 May 2015 (UTC)
- Sounds good to me. I cannot think of any other way to simplify it further. Thanks for the suggestion. --Niwi3 (talk) 18:12, 25 May 2015 (UTC)
- Still too long, but maybe you would be ok with
- Thank you for your review. What do you think about this one: "...that it is possible to hear some pats of Sonic Youth's 1987 album Sister during quiet sections of the band's 1994 album Experimental Jet Set, Trash and No Star because it was recorded over the same master tapes." Thanks. --Niwi3 (talk) 10:13, 25 May 2015 (UTC)
