- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:50, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
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Evin Demirhan edit
- ... that the prize-winning documentary movie Know My Name is about the young Evin Demirhan, who began wrestling to financially support her crowded family and became later a world bronze medalist?
Source: "Selected Festivals and Awards: Adana Golden Boll Film Festival: Special Jury Prize, Best Editing Adana - Antalya Golden Orange Film Festival: Best Documentaryk, "Supporting her family of 13 on a wrestling salary" [1], "Evin Demirhan Dünya Güreş Şampiyonası'nda 48 kiloda bronz madalya kazandı" [2]
- Reviewed: Plated (meal kits)
Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 13:23, 31 August 2017 (UTC).
CeeGee New, in time, long enough, sourced, no copyvios seen, QPQ done. However, while the article says she struggled to financially support her family, it does not say that she began wrestling to do so. Please add (and cite) that to the article. I'd also suggest removing the mention of the documentary in the hook, and just going with:
ALT1: that Evin Demirhan began wrestling to financially support her crowded family, and later became a world bronze medalist?--Usernameunique (talk) 19:42, 1 September 2017 (UTC)- @Usernameunique: Thanks for the review. The phrase "began wrestling" was unfortunately not sourced. So, I rather propose following ALT2:
- ALT2: ... that as a high school student Evin Demirhan supported her family of 13 financially by wrestling, and later became a world bronze medalist? CeeGee 14:24, 2 September 2017 (UTC)
Thanks CeeGee, approving ALT2. Made a slight change ("that the high school student" to "that as a high school student") to make it clear that she is now older. Also switched "became later" to "later became" out of personal preference. --Usernameunique (talk) 16:19, 2 September 2017 (UTC)
