Template:Did you know nominations/Der yidisher arbeyter (Paris)
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:22, 28 October 2011 (UTC)
Der yidisher arbeyter (Paris) edit
... that Der yidisher arbeyter (cover pictured), founded in 1911, was the first Jewish labour journal published in France?
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Created/expanded by Soman (talk). Self nom at 14:07, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
Date, length fine, few but good refs, hook nicely to the point, pic seems licensed, good! Recommend to translate the title, no need to wl France:
- ALT1:... that 1911 journal Der yidisher arbeyter (The Jewish Worker) (pictured) was the first Yiddish labour journal published in France? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:54, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
- I'm ok with ALT1, but the reference clearly says 'first Jewish', not 'first Yiddish'. --Soman (talk) 06:32, 22 October 2011 (UTC)
- I tried to avoid saying Jewish twice, how about "in Yiddish" somewhere to inform a Main page reader who can't tell from the title what language that is? Your turn. But I am ok with the hook also, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:42, 22 October 2011 (UTC)
- How about
- ALT2:
... that in 1911 the first Jewish labour journal published in France was Der yidisher arbeyter (pictured)?Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:16, 23 October 2011 (UTC)- No, that becomes a bit weird grammatically. As stated before, I'm ok with ALT1. --Soman (talk) 09:34, 23 October 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1 then, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:08, 25 October 2011 (UTC)
- No, that becomes a bit weird grammatically. As stated before, I'm ok with ALT1. --Soman (talk) 09:34, 23 October 2011 (UTC)
