Template:Did you know nominations/Dehenna Davison

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:07, 15 January 2020 (UTC)

Dehenna Davison

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• ... that Bishop Auckland's first Conservative MP Dehenna Davison's wedding was televised? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
  • ALT1:... that Dehenna Davison is the first Conservative member of parliament for Bishop Auckland, a seat previously held by the Labour Party since 1935? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
  • ALT2:... that Bishop Auckland's first Conservative MP Dehenna Davison used to work in a video games shop?
  • ALT3:... that Dehenna Davison is Bishop Auckland's first Conservative member of parliament since the constituency's creation in 1885?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/2018 24 Hours of Daytona

Created by Cowlibob (talk) and Miraclepine (talk). Nominated by Cowlibob (talk) at 16:01, 13 December 2019 (UTC).

• Hi Cowlibob, review follows: article created 13 December; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline to reliable sources throughout; I didn't notice any overly close paraphrasing from the sources used; all hooks are OK and backed up by the article and sources cited, I reordered ALT1 slightly ("... a seat previously..." works better when following the name of the seat, I think) and spelt out MP for non-British readers; my personal preference is on ALT1 which focuses on her political career rather than her personal life/early job; just awaiting a QPQ and this one will be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 08:48, 15 December 2019 (UTC)

@Dumelow: Agree in favouring those type of hooks. I've added one more of those as ALT3, verified by The Times ref "....was created in 1885, Bishop Auckland has voted for a Conservative MP". I'll add a QPQ soon and let you know.Cowlibob (talk) 12:10, 15 December 2019 (UTC)

@Dumelow: QPQ provided above. Cowlibob (talk) 12:26, 17 December 2019 (UTC)

All good. I can't see the Times source (paywall) but happy to AGF, our article support it. Preference for ALT1 or ALT3 - Dumelow (talk) 12:48, 17 December 2019 (UTC)