Template:Did you know nominations/Dan Jones (footballer, born 1994)

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The result was: promoted by Graearms (talk) 14:36, 24 July 2022 (UTC)

Dan Jones (footballer, born 1994)

Improved to Good Article status by EchetusXe (talk). Self-nominated at 22:35, 11 July 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - I had a little trouble parsing the phrasing of the hook. Suggest ALT1 ... that footballer Dan Jones credits his skill at taking throw-ins to having been a javelin thrower as a child?
QPQ: Done.

Overall: New GA (same day as nomination), well-sourced and neutral. No copyvio concerns, proper QPQ done. Hook is sourced and interesting. I've suggested alternative wording, ALT1, above; @EchetusXe: keen for your thoughts on that? Chocmilk03 (talk) 05:12, 19 July 2022 (UTC)

Yeah that new hook is better worded than mine.EchetusXe 11:14, 19 July 2022 (UTC)
Excellent, thanks! Requesting new reviewer for ALT1 (I had forgotten I would need to do this, apologies!). The rest of the criteria are met. Chocmilk03 (talk) 22:00, 19 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Ticking ALT1. Rest of review as per Chocmilk03 above. 97198 (talk) 04:09, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
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