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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:43, 26 August 2019 (UTC)

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Curzon Street Baroque

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Dining room at Sandringham House
Dining room at Sandringham House

Created by Giano (talk). Nominated by Johnbod (talk) at 13:24, 17 July 2019 (UTC).

Substantial article on excellent sources, and I think to create such a beauty, you may take a few extra days, especially with tennis in the way of writing. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:43, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
  • Re: the timing, neither particularly matters—even the 5th July deadline would be five days ago. But I suggest that this is what WP:IAR was written for.
    -Article relatively recently created (but see above), obviously long enough, neutral, hook is cited in the article, no copyvio/closeparaphrasing (excepting quotes and bald facts), the hook is well within character limit (115 chars), accurate, sourced, probably of interest, both to students of architecture and the bizarre. Not sure if the image "how up well at small size" though. Awaiting QPQ. ——SerialNumber54129 13:47, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
Didn't I say I have no problem? - (ec): I accept the offline sources AGF, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed, but I think this one might show even better in small size. Can you please have a ref at the end of each paragraph, for formality's sake?
Some suggestions for the article, take or not:
The reasoning of "Decorators' Baroque" and "gay" is not clear, and the quote a bit not as elegant as some design's ;)
  • I didn’t write the quote, blame its inelegance on Osbert Sitwell. Giano (talk) 19:32, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
Not sure we need "true Baroque".
  • Yes, we do need it, otherwise it confuses with all the many revivals.Giano (talk) 19:32, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
Not sure we need so many commas.
  • English grammar is what it is. Giano (talk) 19:32, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
"formed a ... clique around themselves" - what does "around themselves" add?
  • These were extremely self-indulgent people, quite deliberately excluding other. Remove if you don’t like, but that’s why it says around themselves. To provide emphasis and the almost cult like behaviour. Giano (talk)
I'd prefer simpler image captions, and the context rather go to prose. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:07, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
  • Nope. I am writing for the clever 14 year old, who looks more at the pictures. Each image has been carefully chosen and it MUST explain why. Giano (talk) 19:32, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
Looks like you got two reviewers now ;) - me first ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:08, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
@Gerda Arendt: Yeah, we edit-conflicted; so I'm a mini-reviewer  :) ——SerialNumber54129 14:42, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
Giano, all points taken, - as I said, just questions, which have nothing to with approval or not. The refs, however, are needed, or we will have problems later. - Take your time, and happy travels. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:12, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
OK, I think that must be sufficient refs now? Giano (talk) 17:26, 19 July 2019 (UTC)
Great, thank you! The Benton ref is not there yet, but I trust that you will add it. Go for GA, anyway. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:54, 19 July 2019 (UTC)
The Benton reference is already there and linked: "Benton, Benton and Wood & Art Déco (1910–1939) 2010, pp. 13–28."
It is called (Sfn), but not defined, no? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:54, 19 July 2019 (UTC)
No Gerda. It is defined. There is no such message on the page. All sfns are defined. Dr. K. 20:03, 19 July 2019 (UTC)
I added Benton to references. Dr. K. 20:13, 19 July 2019 (UTC)
Appreciate it, - was approved anyway ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:18, 19 July 2019 (UTC)
Thank you Greda. I know, but I don't like loose ends. I replaced the sfn template with a normal Gbook ref anyway. That was the only sfn in the article, so I thought it would be ok to be replaced with a regular cite book template. Dr. K. 20:24, 19 July 2019 (UTC)
I approved a bit up already, but am happy to repeat: exquisite! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:13, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but "Baroque" is mentioned three times in the hook. Yoninah (talk) 18:25, 19 August 2019 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: Thank you Yoninah. How about ALT1:
  • ALT1

... that the 1920s–1930s interior design style Curzon Street Baroque (example pictured) was also known as Buggers' Baroque?

Dr. K. 19:10, 19 August 2019 (UTC)
  • Thank you! Restoring tick for ALT1 per Gerda Arendt's review. Yoninah (talk) 19:14, 19 August 2019 (UTC)
The problem WHICH SHOULD HAVE BEEN STATED MUCH MORE CLEARLY by the tagger for an article in a prep queue, is given in his hidden comment, and obliquely referred to in his edit summary - there are two Tinniswoods in the references & the notes don't distinguish which is used. No wonder both Giano and I missed this at first. @Giano: or someone has now sorted this. The rest is personal style quirks and can be ignored. Johnbod (talk) 22:04, 20 August 2019 (UTC)
@Yoninah: Reference issues have been resolved. Please see Talk:Curzon_Street_Baroque#Full_citations_needed. Thank you. Dr. K. 03:36, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
  • Now a bot is telling me this is not on the main DYK - presumably because it was removed to the prep queue. Do I need to replace it on the main list? Johnbod (talk) 17:48, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
    • I re-listed it at WP:DYKN. Yoninah (talk) 22:01, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
      • I'm sorry, but I must call for another reviewer to sign off on the references. Just writing "Charlish" or "Woods" in the citations, and just the author's name and name of work, without any publication or publishing date, does not help the reader understand the reference. (BTW Churlish is also a dead link for me.) Similarly, citation 4, "The Evelyn Waugh Society", tells me nothing about the title, author, date, etc. Yoninah (talk) 22:07, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
        Re references: I have added some information (publication titles, dates) to some of the references, but there are still problems. I am unable to open the Charlish source. There are two citations to "Lucie-Smith, p.146", but Lucie-Smith is not in the Bibliography (nor given in full in the Citations, as some sources strangely are). Another citation is "Stamp, p.44"; again, the full reference for Stamp is not in the Bibliography or Citations. One of the citations simply states "The Times Literary supplement; 17 October 2018", with no author, article title or page number to indicate where in that issue the cited information can be found. I think this is going to need some more input from Giano to fix the issues with the sourcing. RebeccaGreen (talk) 17:17, 23 August 2019 (UTC)
        (edited to add DYK?, and I have notified the article creator and the nominator, again.) RebeccaGreen (talk) 14:57, 24 August 2019 (UTC)

i have added the two missing books and clarified the Times Lit Supplement ref. Regarding the seemingly unobtainable www.culturewars.org reference, I’ll try and source that from elsewhere, it’s hardly a controversial view. I still can’t help wondering, though, if this is a suitable subject for the Main Page. The disparagement of Homosexual decorators is not everyone’s cup of tea, especially when written for fun rather than with a serious agenda. I do hope it doesn’t upset anyone if it’s ever allowed on the Main Page. Giano (talk)

  • @Yoninah: I'm sorry, but you're mistaken. Wikipedia commonly uses short references which refer to a full citation in a Bibliography section, for example. It is transparently clear to the reader that "Charlish" refers to the full citation given in the bibliography by Nicky Charlish, for example, and the same for the others. I've used the Internet archive to recover an online version of the Charlish source. Have you any other concerns? --RexxS (talk) 17:50, 24 August 2019 (UTC)
Giano, I take your point. What about focusing on features of the style, for example:
ALT2 ... that in the Curzon Street Baroque style, old hymn books were sometimes repurposed as cigarette boxes, and gilt prie-dieux became gramophone cabinets?
ALT3 ... that features of Curzon Street Baroque included trompe l'oeil murals and Canalettos of doubtful provenance?
Re the Charlish references: I think we do need another reference for "the ornate Baroque style then regarded as vulgar and excessive" (which is an opinion), and for "The painter Rex Whistler developed a Baroque influence to his work, while the society photographer Cecil Beaton has been described as full of "Baroque playfulness"." Even if a direct quote isn't used, again, they are opinions about Whistler's and Beaton's work, so should be sourced. Hope you can find some! (Or maybe RexxS has - I'll check now.) RebeccaGreen (talk) 17:55, 24 August 2019 (UTC)
While we are at it we might work in the well-known quip about Beaton, that his "Baroque is worse than his bite". Is there a pressing need for a new hook? Otherwise this has been chewed over enough already, I think. Johnbod (talk) 18:05, 24 August 2019 (UTC)
Johnbod, Giano's concern about putting a disparaging term about homosexuals on the front page. Would we put a hook saying, eg, something was painted "nigger brown"? That was a term used for a colour (actually not disparagingly, just descriptively); this was a term used in a way that was intended disparagingly at the time, and still is. RebeccaGreen (talk) 18:21, 24 August 2019 (UTC)

Referencing issues have been resolved, we now need a new reviewer (and Giano the article creator) to consider the ALT hooks. RebeccaGreen (talk) 17:58, 24 August 2019 (UTC)

Oh Heavens!(can one still politically say that?) I think people need to know how homosexuals were disparaged in the 20th century. My view is that it’s truthful history and people need to know that. “Buggers Baroque” in the hook will drag in the 14-year-olds and educate them. I just question if such a hook won’t be too much for some of our more politically correct editors. I’m glad you are now happy with the references, if only all life’s problems were so easily sorted.Giano (talk) 20:46, 24 August 2019 (UTC)
Giano I see, I did not understand who you were referring to when you said you were concerned that it wasn't suitable for the front page. ALT 1 still stands, though, and there are now also ALT2 and ALT3, so hopefully another reviewer will choose one of them. RebeccaGreen (talk) 20:57, 24 August 2019 (UTC)

How about: DYK George V famously said “Bugger Bognor”, but his wife, Queen Mary, preferred to bugger Baroque? Giano (talk) 21:53, 24 August 2019 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: (new reviewer) ALT1 , ALT2 , and ALT3 all good, but I prefer ALT1, which I think will have broader appeal due to its content and it being less jargon-y than the other two hooks. IARing on the newness (12 days, nbd). Concur with the above suggestion to take this to GA, an interesting article, well done. – Levivich 18:05, 26 August 2019 (UTC)

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