Template:Did you know nominations/Crime in the City (Sixty to Zero Part I)

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 17 February 2019 (UTC)

Crime in the City (Sixty to Zero Part I)

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Created by Rlendog (talk). Self-nominated at 17:20, 23 January 2019 (UTC).

What do think of putting the hook the other way round:
ALT1: ... that the released version of Neil Young's song "Crime in the City (Sixty to Zero Part I)" was almost 9 minutes long, but the the original version was more than twice as long, and included a verse about genocide of Native Americans?
Interesting facts on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. If you prefer to speak about what's there instead of what not, you might use one of the poetic descriptions such as "a chilling litany of cynicism and resignation". Will watch. - A few suggestions for the article: I never need more than three references for one fact. I'd say "Young's biographer", or one could read it as a young biographer. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:15, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
  • I am fine with the ALT. I can change the wording in the article about the biographer.Rlendog (talk) 13:55, 4 February 2019 (UTC)