Template:Did you know nominations/Cool for the Summer

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:06, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

Cool for the Summer

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• ... that Demi Lovato was accused of copying Jessie J and Katy Perry in the lyrics for her song "Cool for the Summer"?

• ALT1: ... that the music video for Demi Lovato's song "Cool for the Summer" has been described as her "most sexually liberated video" and marked "a new chapter of her career"?

Created/expanded by SNUGGUMS (talk). Self-nominated at 16:25, 4 July 2015 (UTC).

• , This article is newly created and long enough, without any copyright violations to mention of, and everything checks out with the inline sources provided for verification purposes. The article has now been passed, good job, SNUGGUMS.The Cross Bearer (talk) 04:58, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

• While this certainly is interesting and warrants mentioning in the article, this hook unduly focuses on a serious negative accusation against a living individual, which is discouraged as per the eligibility criteria for a hook's content (third bullet point). Especially given that these claims were never substantiated, tested in court, or even brought up by the artists Lovato allegedly copied, there is no compelling reason to allow this negative hook to reach the front page. Could you propose an alt hook? ~ Rob^Talk 08:45, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

• Hi BU Rob13. Not sure how much better this will be, but here's an ALT1: that the music video for Demi Lovato's song Cool for the Summer has been described as her "most sexually liberated video" and marked "a new chapter of her career"? Feel free to adjust or offer other suggestions. Snuggums (talk / edits) 15:43, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

• I was iffy on the "sexually liberated" description, but I think it's clearly the intent of the video and song based on the lyrics, so this seems much better. ALT1 good to go; restoring tick per previous review. ~ Rob^Talk 18:36, 2 August 2015 (UTC)

• Thank you :) Snuggums (talk / edits) 20:50, 2 August 2015 (UTC)