Template:Did you know nominations/Cognitive slippage
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The result was: rejected by Yoninah (talk) 23:45, 17 June 2017 (UTC)
Hook not cited; nominator inactive
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Cognitive slippage edit
- … that cognitive slippage is manifested in patterns of speech where categories and lists become overly broad as concepts that seem unrelated at first glance become related through tangential connections "Loas, G., Dimassi, H., Monestes, J. L., & Yon, V. (2013). Criterion Validity Of The Cognitive Slippage And Schizotypal Ambivalence Scales1. Psychological Reports,113(3), 930-934. doi:10.2466/02.19.pr0.113x27z5"
5x expanded by Comahgoodness (talk). Self-nominated at 14:01, 27 April 2017 (UTC).
Thank you for expanding this article! I hope you got double duty out of some of your writing :-). DYKcheck says the article was expanded 5x, so it's long enough and new enough. I didn't have time to check each source, but I spot-checked a few and they supported the statements they referenced. My main problem is that the reference for the hook doesn't contain the information in the hook. The article only defines cognitive slippage as "mild associative loosening." The hook should reflect the information in the source. A different hook would be fine too.- This isn't required for DYK, but in general the lead ought to summarize everything in the article. The information currently in the lead section explains what cognitive slippage is, and should be its own section. A page like panic attack has a separate section defining what it is. Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk) 19:26, 25 May 2017 (UTC)
