- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle 23:38, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
Clover Food Lab
edit- ... that Boston mayor Thomas Menino said Clover Food Lab's BLT sandwich is the best BLT in Boston, and the sandwich uses soy bacon?
Created/expanded by Emw (talk). Self nom at 04:38, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
I checked everything over when I encouraged Emw to nominate the article. Hook could use some wording help, but otherwise it's good to go. NW (Talk) 19:12, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
- Could the nominator please suggest a hook that sounds less advertisy? PanydThe muffin is not subtle 19:45, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
- I was thinking something along the lines of "... that Boston mayor Thomas Menino called Clover Food Lab's soy bacon sandwich the "best BLT in Boston", which still has some of the same advertisy-type issues but is at least shorter. It's an issue with all articles on new corporations, I think—there's very little history to dive into so you have to go with something that's newer, which is often either unduly positive or negative. NW (Talk) 19:50, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
