Template:Did you know nominations/Carmen Balcells

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The result was: promoted by Orlady (talk) 00:59, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Carmen Balcells edit

  • ... that literary agent Carmen Balcells represents six Nobel Prize winners?
  • Comment: Article created in my userspace on February 27, 2012 moved to mainspace on February 28, 2012

Created/expanded by GroveGuy (talk). Self nom at 03:43, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

  • There are two paragraphs in the Biography section that are unreferenced, along with the personal life section. Until this is fixed, I cannot even consider a full review. SilverserenC 23:23, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
I have made revisions beefing up the lead and providing citations for almost every statement. Thanks for looking at my article. This is my first time with a Did You Know article.-GroveGuy (talk) 18:17, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
Article was nominated within 5 days of creation, is past the 1500 character length requirement, and is cited properly. The hook is less than 200 characters and is interesting. A review of another DYK is not necessary, as this is the nominator's first DYK nom. Looks good to go.
The only thing i'll comment on is that I don't think the list of authors is necessary at the end of the first body paragraph. It should probably be removed. SilverserenC 18:39, 3 March 2012 (UTC)