Template:Did you know nominations/Bunkyo Civic Center
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Harrias talk 07:25, 7 January 2014 (UTC)
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Bunkyo Civic Center edit
- ... that Bunkyo Civic Center was formerly as Bunkyo City Hall which is the venue for the first Japan Record Awards?
5x expanded by Sdee (talk). Self nominated at 14:10, 23 November 2013 (UTC).
- Comment: is that supposed to say "was formerly Bunkyo City Hall" ? The article also says "formally", which I believe is not the correct use of this word. Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû (blah?) 23:48, 23 November 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1 So, " ... that Bunkyo Civic Center, the venue for the first Japan Record Awards, was formerly Bunkyo City Hall?" Pretty boring though. The thing it looks like might make a better one. Johnbod (talk) 18:24, 14 December 2013 (UTC)
The page was 5x expanded at the time of Sdee's nomination, but needed a serious copyedit. I started to copyedit, and now it is 328 characters short of a 5x expansion. I am unable to understand the meaning of paragraphs 1, 2, 3, and 5 under Facilities, as the English is rather garbled. I added "citation needed" and "clarification needed" tags as well. There is a discrepancy between the height of the building cited in the History section and in the infobox. The Pez quote would make a far better hook, but first this article needs more development by someone who understands the English language. Yoninah (talk) 00:42, 18 December 2013 (UTC)
Sdee's talk page was pinged with the information that this nomination needed action nearly three weeks ago. Sdee has done only one edit this year, and would have seen the ping, but nothing has been done. Regretfully closing this nomination and the other one still outstanding as unsuccessful; both have clearly been abandoned. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:41, 7 January 2014 (UTC)
