Template:Did you know nominations/Brown-headed crow

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The result was: promoted by Wugapodes [t^hɔk] [ˈkan.ˌʧɻɪbz] 22:24, 14 August 2016 (UTC)

Brown-headed crow edit

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... that the brown-headed crow is presumed to have some unknown specialist habitat requirement that prevents it from having a continuous range in Indonesia?

Reviewed: Elwin Cockett

5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 13:13, 9 August 2016 (UTC).

Comment @Cwmhiraeth: It all seems to check out. It has been expanded five-fold in the eligible time frame, and the hook is directly cited and is supported by the reference. I do ask, however, is it possible to make the hook clearer? I think it's very interesting, though. "specialised" may be clearer that "specialist", and I'd just replace "some" with "an" to make it a little stronger. I'd also recommend linking Indonesia. ~Cheers, Ten Ton Parasol 19:02, 11 August 2016 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that the brown-headed crow is presumed to have an unknown specialised habitat requirement that prevents it from having a continuous range in Indonesia? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:23, 11 August 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for taking the suggestions under consideration. Ticking, per the review in my previous comment.