Template:Did you know nominations/Brittany Luse

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hey man im josh talk 16:34, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

Brittany Luse

Created by Innisfree987 (talk) and CaptainAngus (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 37 past nominations.

Innisfree987 (talk) 03:03, 26 May 2024 (UTC).

  • @Innisfree987 and CaptainAngus: New enough (from draft) and long enough. QPQ present. Hook fact checks out and is interesting. My concern is that I think there are too many quotes in the critical reception section, although one or two would work well. Consider shortening a number of quotes and cutting/paraphrasing a few. I'd like to see that fixed before promoting the page. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 04:00, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Sammi Brie, I have added a sentence of summary and replaced one quote and portions of two more with paraphrasing. Innisfree987 (talk) 01:07, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
    • This helps. Still longer than I'd have done maybe, but it does help enough. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 02:31, 24 June 2024 (UTC)