Template:Did you know nominations/Beverley Peck Johnson
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:07, 28 November 2015 (UTC)
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Beverley Peck Johnson edit
- ... that voice teacher Beverley Peck Johnson assisted President Lyndon B. Johnson in his post-operative recovery from the surgical removal of vocal fold nodules?
- ALT1:
... that voice teacher Beverley Peck Johnson's students included opera singers Renée Fleming, Renata Tebaldi, and Anna Moffo, and of actors Madeline Kahn and Kevin Kline? - Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Frank Sinatra and Jewish causes
- ALT1:
Created by 4meter4 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:47, 22 November 2015 (UTC).
Interesting life, on a great obituary and excellent supporting sources. I would prefer the ALT, as having to do more with opera. What do you think of a different wording:
- ALT2: ... that Beverley Peck Johnson trained the voices of opera singers Renée Fleming, Anna Moffo and Renata Tebaldi, and actors Madeline Kahn and Kevin Kline?
- I thought reading that another hook idea might be that a student had to choose between cigarettes and her ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:30, 27 November 2015 (UTC)
- Ok. I added the content and properly referenced it. The said student was actually Kevin Kline. lol ::ALT3: ... that voice teacher Beverley Peck Johnson told actor Kevin Kline that he had to choose between her and cigarettes if he wanted to be her pupil? 4meter4 (talk) 13:40, 27 November 2015 (UTC)
like that for a quirky ;) - struck only one, leaving the choice to the prep builder. Do me a favour: the lead should be a summary of facts in the body (with no refs unless for quotes), get Tebaldi etc to the body also, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:58, 27 November 2015 (UTC)
- Ok. I added the content and properly referenced it. The said student was actually Kevin Kline. lol ::ALT3: ... that voice teacher Beverley Peck Johnson told actor Kevin Kline that he had to choose between her and cigarettes if he wanted to be her pupil? 4meter4 (talk) 13:40, 27 November 2015 (UTC)
