Template:Did you know nominations/Belén López (actress), Belén López (flamenco dancer)

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 13:04, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

Belén López (actress), Belén López (flamenco dancer) edit

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~~... that one Belén López is an actress, and another is a flamenco dancer?~~

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Nvvchar (talk), Rosiestep (talk), and Ipigott (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 10:17, 14 June 2013 (UTC).

Reviewing--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:15, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Natalie Hennedige and Template:Did you know nominations/Cygne blanc

I have removed Ipigott (talk · contribs) from the Flamenco dancer credit list.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:42, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
Both articles re new enough and long enough.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:47, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
Both articles have sources for the hook and are relatively well-sourced in general.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:58, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
The hook is properly formatted, but not so exciting. It would be better if there were something more interesting to say about them rather than name both of their jobs.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:58, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. How about ALT1 Hook given below?--Nvvchar. 01:08, 22 June 2013 (UTC)

ALT1 Hook ... that while Belén López (actress), was nominated for Newcomer Award for her role in "The Distance (2006)", Belén López (flamenco dancer) was the inspiration of film director Franco Zeffirelli?

That is much better, but did you spell that award right?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:05, 22 June 2013 (UTC)

I've corrected the spelling in ALT1. --Rosiestep (talk) 05:07, 22 June 2013 (UTC)

The hook says "Newcomer" but the article says "New Comer". The source listed has no mention of it whatsoever. A correct source will have to be supplied, or the hook fact will have to change. If this hook is to be used, I'd prefer to see the disambiguation handled differently:
ALT 1A: ... that while actress Belén López, was nominated for the Newcomer Award for her role in The Distance (2006), flamenco dancer Belén López was the inspiration of film director Franco Zeffirelli? MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 18:35, 22 June 2013 (UTC)

Yes, corrected in the article and a reference fixed. Thanks for the revised version of the hook. An oblivious disambiguation escaped me. Revised ALT1A hook is fine with us. --Nvvchar. 22:30, 23 June 2013 (UTC)

ALT 1A is all set.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:48, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

The ref was in an unusable state, but I found the intended source and fixed it. People are often reluctant to allow IMDB as a source, but it's probably okay to use it for a simple list of awards. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 19:49, 24 June 2013 (UTC)