Template:Did you know nominations/Battle of Port Gamble
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The result was: rejected by Matty.007 16:37, 5 June 2014 (UTC)
Withdrawn by nominator
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Battle of Port Gamble edit
- ... that the first U.S. Navy battle death in the Pacific Ocean was Gustave Engelbrecht, killed in a fight with Haida warriors at the Battle of Port Gamble in 1856?
Created by BlueSalix (talk). Self-nominated at 01:19, 25 May 2014 (UTC).
- Hook doesn't seem very hooky to me, perhaps something about the US only having one casualty? Or perhaps shorten it a bit.
Swartout and Douglas eventually reached a compromise: the Haida were provisioned with food and new canoes, then dropped-off at the edge of Russian America.
needs sourcing. Will do more review upon replies. Thanks, Matty.007 10:30, 27 May 2014 (UTC)
- That's ridiculous. There's nothing all that interesting about a battle in which a steam age military incurred one casualty fighting against a bronze age enemy. However, of 60,000-odd battle deaths over 230 years the U.S. Navy has incurred, the very first one to occur in the Pacific Ocean is a chronological landmark. First, last, biggest, tallest, smallest - these are interesting things. "Less than usual, but not necessarily abnormal given conditions and circumstances," is not interesting. BlueSalix (talk) 20:07, 27 May 2014 (UTC)
- Hook doesn't seem very hooky to me, perhaps something about the US only having one casualty? Or perhaps shorten it a bit.