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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 22:00, 2 September 2013 (UTC)
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Barun Biswas edit
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Barun Biswas, an Indian school teacher, lead protests against a gang of extortionists who were using rape to terrorize the local people of Sutia in West Bengal?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Barony of Chalandritsa
- Comment: Feel free to suggest ALTs
Created by Titodutta (talk), Bgwhite (talk), Ekabhishek (talk), Orlady (talk), and 115.184.169.178 (talk). Nominated by Titodutta (talk) at 00:19, 11 August 2013 (UTC).
Article doesn't say "extortionists". Otherwise everything looks good. I suggest simplifying:
- ALT1:
... that Indian school teacher Barun Biswas led protests against a gang using rape to terrorize the local people of Sutia in West Bengal?
- ALT1:
- Or using a different fact:
- ALT2: ... that Indian school teacher Barun Biswas was murdered for protesting against rape in Sutia, West Bengal?
- --ThaddeusB (talk) 02:16, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
