Template:Did you know nominations/Band-tailed fruiteater

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The result was: promoted by sst^flyer 05:43, 17 September 2015 (UTC)

Band-tailed fruiteater, Fiery-throated fruiteater, Masked fruiteater, Black-chested fruiteater, Green-and-black fruiteater, Barred fruiteater, Orange-breasted fruiteater, Golden-breasted fruiteater

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• Band-tailed fruiteater
• Fiery-throated fruiteater
• Masked fruiteater
• Black-chested fruiteater
• Green-and-black fruiteater
• Barred fruiteater
• Orange-breasted fruiteater
• Golden-breasted fruiteater

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Band-tailed fruiteater

• ... that the band-tailed fruiteater (pictured), the fiery-throated fruiteater, the black-chested fruiteater, the orange-breasted fruiteater, the golden-breasted fruiteater, the green-and-black fruiteater, the masked fruiteater and the barred fruiteater are all native to montane forests in the Andes?

• Reviewed: J.C. Nicholson
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5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 09:06, 23 August 2015 (UTC).

• There are eight nice informative articles here and they are all well reffed, they look long enough and they have enough ref to good sources. What I could not find was a ref following every sentence about mountain habitat which is key to the hook. The hook is OK - at least readers will want to check that montane means what they think it means. I fixed the ones that said they were stubs. Ping me when the hook bits are OK Victuallers (talk) 17:11, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

@Victuallers: Thanks, they should be OK now. The only dubious one is the Fiery-throated fruiteater which is described as living in the foothills of the Andes (1500m max), so you could remove it from the hook if you thought it unsatisfactory, or use ALT1.

• ALT1 ... that the band-tailed fruiteater (pictured), the fiery-throated fruiteater, the black-chested fruiteater, the orange-breasted fruiteater, the golden-breasted fruiteater, the green-and-black fruiteater, the masked fruiteater and the barred fruiteater are all native to forests in the Andes and its foothills? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:57, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

• see above. These are all new expansions from tiny stubs. No paraphrasing spotted from the variety of sources used. They are all neutral. The images are very attractive and this one (at least) is free. Alt1 works fine and I've partially struck the main hook to address the authors own suggested issue. Ihave suggested an alt2 but its not required. Victuallers (talk)

• ALT2 ... that the , the black-chested, orange-breasted, golden-breasted, green-and-black, masked, barred and band-tailed fruiteater (pictured) are all native to montane forests in the Andes, but the fiery-throated fruiteater is only found in the foothills?

Thanks. I have tweaked ALT2 and struck the original hook entirely. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:11, 14 September 2015 (UTC)