Template:Did you know nominations/Balkan whip snake

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 09:29, 26 September 2014 (UTC)

Balkan whip snake edit

  • ... that the Balkan whip snake hibernates in winter and several snakes may share a single site?

Created/expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nominated at 07:51, 13 September 2014 (UTC).

  • I'd add "hibernating" before "site" in the hook, or make the second bit a more subordinate clause - can be reworded so there is only one. Otherwise age, size and hook cited. I can't see the book on google books, accepted in good faith. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 15:11, 25 September 2014 (UTC)
Its a real, paper book. How about:
  • ALT1 ... that the Balkan whip snake hibernates in winter, with several snakes sometimes sharing a single site? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:44, 25 September 2014 (UTC)
ok, good to go. offline sources accepted in good faith. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:22, 25 September 2014 (UTC)