Template:Did you know nominations/Aya Girard de Langlade Mpali

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The result was: promoted by Schwede66 (talk) 22:24, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

Aya Girard de Langlade Mpali

  • Reviewed: KTLV
  • Comment: There's no mention of/source for being Gabon's only female Olympic swimmer but there are sources saying that Maël Ambonguilat (male) was Gabon's first Olympic swimmer in 2016,([1]) and that the Mpali siblings (Aya and her brother) are the only 2020 Gabonese swimmers([2]). The hook may be "overloaded", so can pick any of the many interesting facts about this barely-17-year-old!

Created by Kingsif (talk). Self-nominated at 21:27, 26 July 2021 (UTC).

  • Olympic Nice!, Alt1 is less loaded and I think gets the main hooky aspects of her story Victuallers (talk) 08:04, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
It was too short and not sure about ref as it was repeating another source explicitly... so I added another. As you note the original hook was overloaded so I have used that to create an abridged version. Hopefully this can make it for the 30th @Schwede66: but if not I suggest Alt2 (approval required). Its neutral, I can see no close paraphrasing. QPQ done. GTG. Victuallers (talk) 09:26, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
ALT1 to T:DYK/P2